Zilo
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| Subject: Zilo Telavu(W.I.P) Sun Aug 01, 2010 8:39 am | |
| Basic Info
[i]Name:Zilo Telavu Alias:Mr.Bookworm Age:19 Gender:Male ~ Appearance:
Personality: Zilo is a kind young man. He thinks that everyone deserves a second chance in life. He doesn't mind fighting as much as he use too. Though he prefers to read books and stay away from most fights. But when someone he care for needs help he doesn't hesitate. He fights for the good of everything. When he is fighting he seems to almost be in a demon state himself. Because he doesn't care if he gets sliced or not. He is always the demon on the battle field. Zilo loves to read his books. Most of the time the other espadas do not see him wihtout a book or something to read he generally keeps one in his back pocket jsut in case there is nothing to do. He is afraid of girls mostly because he was betrayed by one when he was a human. And not only that but they never liked him in the first place and he didn't like them because when he was little he was always picked on by them till one day he meet a girl he thought was different then the rest of them till she betrayed him and almost got him killed/
Skill & Rank Info Village:Kiri Rank:Seven swordsman
Skill Specialty- Primary:Taijutsu Secondary:Genjutsu
Chakra Element: Wind
Jutsu
Name:Signature Jutsu:Eight Gates
Rank:A
Type:Taijutsu
Element:there is none for it i think.
Description:
- The Gate of Opening (開門, Kaimon), located in the
brain. Removes the restraints of the brain. Unlocking this gate allows the user to use the Front Lotus.
- The Gate of Healing (休門, Kyūmon; English TV
"The Gate of Rest"), located in the brain. Forcibly increases one's physical strength and temporary re-energizes the body.
- The Gate of Life (生門, Seimon), located on the
spinal cord. Allows the user to use the Reverse Lotus. The increased blood flow turns the skin red.
- The Gate of Pain (傷門, Shōmon), located on the
spinal cord. Increases the user's speed and power. May cause muscles tissue to tear on use.
- The Gate of Limit (杜門, Tomon; English TV
"The Gate of Closing"), per above. Located in the abdomen.
- The Gate of View (景門, Keimon; English TV
"The Gate of Joy"), per above. Located in the stomach. Allows the user to perform the Morning Peacock. Opening of this gate releases such large amounts of chakra that it can cause nearby water bodies to form a vortex around the user.
- The Gate of Wonder (驚門, Kyōmon; English TV
"The Gate of Shock"), per above. Located below the stomach. In the video games, allows the user to perform the Eternal Chaotic Dance.
- The Gate of Death (死門, Shimon), located at the
heart. Releasing this gate uses up all of the body's energy. It makes the heart pump at maximum power and exceeds the power of every other gate.
Name:Signature Jutsu:Reverse Lotus
Rank:A
Type:Taijutsu
Element:there is none for it i think.
Description: This jutsu is an advanced and more destructive version of the Front Lotus, which requires that at least three chakra gates be opened (in every instance in which it has been used, five gates are opened). Once enough gates are open, the user launches the target into the air and strikes them at inhuman speed before hitting them with one arm and one foot, sending the target crashing into the ground. This is usually fatal due to the speed and power behind the attack. Because so many chakra gates are opened at once, it can only be used once, since the user will likely be unable to stand afterward. This is proven when Lee is left barely able to stand after using it on Gaara, and the latter's powerful defenses and long-distance attacks allowed him to win the match. Guy's version involves him launching the enemy into the air, spinning like a drill, and delivering a bone-shattering punch. Might Guy states this technique to be a "combination of such blinding speed that no one can defend themselves
Name:Signature Jutsu:Front Lotus
Rank:b
Type:Taijutsu
Element:there is none for it.
Description:Front Lotus requires the opening of the first of the Eight Chakra Gates, giving the user five times their normal strength. The user launches the opponent into the air and then uses Shadow of the Dancing Leaf. Once behind the opponent, the user restrains them and piledrives them into the ground headfirst while rotating at a ferocious speed. Because it uses one of the chakra gates, the user is left extremely fatigued, making this jutsu a "double-edged sword." However, on episode 193 of the anime, Lee was able to perform this technique without any strain on his body. Kakashi has been shown to be able to use this technique, but to a much lesser degree than Guy and Lee.
Name:Signature Jutsu:Lion Combo
Rank:c
Type:Taijutsu
Element:there is none for it i think.
Description:This jutsu is a variant of Rock Lee's Front Lotus, which Sasuke develops after using his Sharingan to copy the first part of the move. Because Lee wasn't given the chance to finish the attack, Sasuke makes his own ending to it. Like Lee, Sasuke gets to the point where he does Shadow of the Dancing Leaf to get behind an airborne opponent. He then delivers a series a of blows that differ between use. All variations end with the opponent being thrown to the ground and kicked in the chest.
Name:Signature Jutsu:Morning Peacock
Rank:A
Type:Taijutsu
Element:there is none for it i think.
Description:The Morning Peacock is a certain-kill taijutsu born from the philosophy of Might Guy. The principle of this taijutsu is to rapidly increase the body's abilities by opening up to six of the Eight Gates, and then strike the enemy down with countless punches. The technique is started by kicking the enemy into the air, which for most would be an instant kill. The user then jumps into the air in a distinctive stance and begins punching the enemy repeatedly. The speed of the punches is so fast that they are set ablaze by sheer speed and friction. This creates a peacock-like fan of flaming chakra around the opponent. Once the attack is finished, the enemy will be sent crashing back to the ground, covered with the attack's aura.
Name:Bringer of Darkness
Rank:A
Type:Genjutsu
Element:there is none for it i think.
Description:A genjutsu which exerts an hallucinatory effect upon the eyesight, stealing all light away. A world of darkness, as if a thick, jet-black curtain had been dropped. No matter how skilled someone is, they have no option besides turning into sitting ducks. This effect allows the user to attack unseen. Although it negates sight, it does not stop the other senses. In essence, the opponent can sense, hear and smell out the user of the technique and break its effects by landing one hit. In the anime, Tobirama Senju was the one to initiate this technique. In the manga, it was Hashirama Senju.
Name:Signature Flower petal escape
Rank:c
Type:Genjutsu
Element:there is none for it i think.
Description:When trapped inside of a genjutsu or wishing to appear trapped, Kurenai uses this jutsu to dissolve her body into many flower petals which then consume her enemy's body.
Weapons
Name:Wakizashi
Appearance:Overall: 31" Blade Length: 20" Handle Length: 8 1/2" Weight: 1lb 14 oz.
Rank: Chunin or b rank/
Special Abilities:N/A
Origin:It was given to him by his father.
History & Roleplay Sample
History: -Genin Arc-
Zilo Telavu had just entered the ninja academy. He was enjoying the time with his dad at the school. He had taught him how to use Taijutsu and it was fun. He always was wiling to train with his dad. Nothing would stop him till he became stronger.He kept it up as long as he could for him. Training every day Zilo finally began to see that he had possed a good amount of skills in the way of taijutsu. His mother was a genjutsu user. He learned the basics from them. They had a happy life then Zilo finally started in the ninja academy. He kept his grades up to at least a B to keep his father proud at him and it seemed to always work for him. As long as he kept his grades above a B rank he wwas good to his dad. When Zilo did make a C he was punished severaly by his father that only wanted him to be as good as him.
Zilo was walking to school one day and noticed some kids picking on a small girl that seemed to be in a lower grade then them. He ran over and tried to help the little girl he shouted at them. "Hey come on leave her alone you bullies." They laughed at him for trying to protect her. He wasn't strong enough then to protect her but he tried his best anyway and he was proud of it. Though he was beat up severaly by the boys who walked off laughing the girl had felt sorry for him and started to cry a little bit he always told her not to cry and that she should call for help some time if it comes to that again. She nodded to him and smiled a little bit. The two of them started to hang out together and they where friends. Though they got picked on they where always there to cheer each other up.
It was the day of the test and Zilo was prepared he wanted to become a genin and he was determined so bad to pass. He needed to pass at least 2 out of the three test. He failed at the shadow clone test but passed all the others and he was given his head band stating that he had belonged to the village and was a proud genin of their he was happy and knew it would be a long time till he had to try for a chunin and was prepared for that and was sorta happy at that. He started to hang out wiht the girl he liked more and more. They had been friends through the whole thing and they where happy. They started talking about going out and they where happy about the idea. But for now they needed to be more worried on the mission to become Chunin together.
They finally meet up with their sensei he seemed as if he was a nice guy and was happy to meet him he seemed different from the other sensei though he was a little strict. Soon the girl he liked started falling for the guy on their team and they started going out crushing Zilo heart. When they had been so happy this guy came along and swooped her off her feet there was nothing he could but accept the fact he was better then him. The sensei started to speak with Zilo in private wanting to teach him some moves that only he knew in Kiri. Zilo had agreed since his Sensei was a taijutsu specialist like him. He taught him how to use the eight gates. Zilo at the time was only able to open up to the third gate and was a little proud of that he could use at least that much but after the pain on him his sensei told him to only use that in case of a emergency Zilo had to agree to his Sensei and do as he said. He taught him some Taijutsu combos to use outside of battle as well. He grown acustomed to his sensei training him in private every day that he stopped hanging out wiht his old friend but she was to preoccupied with the new guy on the team and dating him.
They finally got their first a rank mission everyone was excited about this it has beena couple of months since they have started their mission and finally got one outside of the village Zilo himself was estatic. It took them all the way to the land of stars to help them out he saw the valley of death or so they called it because down in the valley was full of posionious smoke. Before they ahd come out here his old friend had gotten into a fight with her boyfriend the man on his right he had no need to be so rude to her. He had found out why they had broken up because they where sick of each other and she had caught him with another girl. It seemed now adays it was useless to try and talk to each other and he ignored both of them but at the same time tried to protect them. This mission was only the begining of his fears he had imagine there would be. He never knew there where ninjas out there that seemed to be more dangerous then those he had heard about in his village
He was stuck there in the star village waiting and guarding one night when he heard his old friend fighting with her boyfriend or ex boyfriend he should have thought he walked around the corner to see him slap her to the ground this had angered him sending him into a blind rage beating and kicking the hell out of the guy when he had finished he saw that he had nearly killed his teamate. His best friend was screaming and cussing at him to get away from him. That he had no right to go hitting him like that he sighed. He knew she was right and he was only protecting her. It hurt him to see his best friend had no regards for him anymore and only cared for this boy After that day he never talked to the two of them again. It was sad indeed but when they got back after their mission he never spoke a word besides to his sensei and parents..
-Chunin Arc-
Zilo had finally gotten back to being his olds friend friend again. Though they didn't have the same level of trust as they use to he could understand that. He thought they had broken up with how they where fighting but it seem's they where just fighting and that him with the girl was a misunderstanding truth be told it was his sister. This made her feel like she was too jumpy and Zilo had believe it and it turned out to be true. He never spoke to the guy anymore and stopped talking to the girl herself. Their sensei was proud of them and the chunnin exams where coming soon and he was happy that they could be participating in the exam. They have shown that they are quiet ready for it and was preparing to do what ever they can to pass the exam. They wanted to make their sensei proud of them. Zilo was some what happy that his team was able to participate in it. Their sensei had summoned them for one last training to see if he was going to approve them for the fight. They had to work to beat him. Zilo was able to with his speed to manage to distract him while the others tried to get him from behind he was proud of himself being able to block his sensei but was getting pretty banged up. He hopped they got their combo down perfect in one try.
The group smiled as they thought that they had their sensei for once. They managed to get off the combo but missing one detail. Their sensei had switched with a dummy in the middle of a attack when they had hesitated and he appeared behind the two of them knocking them out and disappeared and appeared beside Zilo bringing his fist up Zilo brought his leg down and blocked the fist heading towards his head. The sensei smiled a little bit as his pup had blocked his attack they continued to spar without breaks and continued to fight. Zilo was breathing heavily he couldn't stand much longer and knew he was almost done for against his sensei. Then he finally spoke and said he had passed the test.
Zilo had made it through the chunnin exam with his fellow teammates they had all been passed to Chunnin and it made him happy he smiled a little bit as they got their group picture taken together to remember this moment their sensei standing behind them smiling as the picture was taken. It had been a long and fascinating week for them. But they where glad that they could finally become chunin but this was only the beginning. They did not know what lied in their future.
Roleplay Sample:-Memory- Zilo was sitting there remembering how it all turned out. He was sitting there walking in to the soul society and hoping for a alliance with the shinigami but that seemed to be different idea of what they had in mind. He didn't expect Sain to follow him to make the next events in his memory happen. He was talking to the Captain commander and then a girl captain head of the kido corps was there with shinigami from every direction. The captain commander before hand had raised his spiritual pressure to his friend that he had sworn to protect her. He sighed as he continued to remember what had happened.
He was sitting there and watched the shinigami leave he put sain behind his back. He had offered the shinigami a hand to get up and apologized for his action he saw that he was wrong in what he did but then was put in a bakudo 99 and then called a dumbass for taking in the misfit girl. Along with him calling them primitive by stating that they acted on instinct instead of thinking about it at first. He was mad and was speaking to him saying what had happened.
When the girl shinigami started spitting out words at him. He had a sword pointed at his neck and his blade taken away from him. And then was told he wasn't going to be free in less he said he wasn't going to attack which had made him say he wasn't going to attack but left in a garganta. He remembered that there was a vaizaird there as well. They put sain in danger with their spiritual pressure and he took action. And then was threaten after apologizing. He had grabbed his sword from the girl and left picking up sain.
-present-
He was sitting there in his chair in las noches sighing as he looked into the empty halls he was tired of all this foolishness. He yawned a little bit before heading to his chambers he opened the door and didn't see her there. And he smiled he could actually sleep for once without being disturbed. Sure the treaty was a fail but at least he gave it a try like Nita told him to try and do. He yawned as he was about to lay down he thought about something he used what gin had left there to contact all the Espadas by V.I.A. he gave them a clear message.
"Good day fellow espadas. We have made a decision on what we are going to do...well me anyway.... You can choose to continue to fight this demon children but i will not all leader ship over you will be given to Incognita the segunda espada. Please respect her as you did me. Well you never really respected me but show her some respect." He ended the message with a yawn and walked back over to his beanie bags. He was tired and wanted to sleep for a long time.
He layed down and smiled he could rest in peace for once. He closed his eyes and slowly drifted into the dark void of sleep. The colors all fading from his vision. Everything going black. His vision started to get dull. Every thing blurring out from his ears and he knew that he was close to sleep then thought about something before knocking out completely. He was wondering if Sain and Yuuki where alright he couldn't imagine what he would do if both of them got hurt.
-Dream-
Zilo was sitting there in his chamber when he heard a scream. He went running out to see sain...But what he couldn't believe was Yuuki standing there as well he wondered how she had gotten to the las noches. Was sain responsible for it. He noticed a demon lord there smiling as he slowly wrote in Sain neck we are coming for you. He walked over to Yuuki and blasted the top half of her body away causing blood to go everywhere. All over the walls and the floor. He walked over to Sain and slowly began ripping her peice by peice. Zilo broke down with tears.
He charged at the demon lord fighting him off. Only to be put down soon. He couldn't believe they had this much strength and speed. They seemed to surpass him in every way or form. He stood up reaching for his Zanpaktou since the normal sword wasn't working only to notice that it was gone. remembering the girl in the Soul society still had it. The demon charged at him. He flew by to end up on the other side. His arm flieing off he gripped it in pain and watched the demon laugh and disappear. Leaving a message in the blood we are coming for you.
-Now again-
He woke up breathing ragged. It had been a long time since he had dreamed. He felt himself crying a little bit and sighed. He had cared for those two more then he let off at times. He got up and walked on out of his chambers seeing no one there and walked off towards the kitchen only to open the door and grab a apple. He walked back to his chamber and heard someone in his room. HE opened the door keeping a hand on his blade and wondering who it was he opened the door and saw.... | |
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