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[-Λսรէﻨռ-] Wandering Ninja
Posts : 31 Join date : 2010-07-25
| Subject: Suiton Giant Tue Aug 03, 2010 2:17 pm | |
| Name: Suiton Giant
Rank:S
Type:NIN Element: Water, Suiton
Description: The suiton giant is a giant made out of chackra water, It needs a large body of water near to use, but Kaizen has mastered this technique to be able to use it where their is none. It is a giant which can launch mass ammounts of water at an enemy. Kaizen is the only user of this technique this technique basically can launch water at the opponent after taking its toll the giant sucks the water back in it continues using thhe same chackra placed in it, because of the power to suck the water back in it can respawn about 5 times before finally being destroyed. The only effect on the user is depending on how much chackra put into the giant, no matter how much you put into it, it drains your chackra and thats about it. It is 45 feet tall, and if you make it full size it drains your chackra alot it causes quite a big toll on the users chackra. It last for 4 post ih i have a large water upply near bye, two post if created from pure chackra, and its weakness is lightning, it would need a very powerful lightning tecnique to take it down.
RP Sample: Kaizen was in a fight with three Akat they had wiped him out even with his sharingan, he had one technique he had not yet used, the suiton giant he was near a large body of water he formed 15 handseals before the giant arrived on spot and drowned his enemys.
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Tetsu-Roddo
Posts : 21 Join date : 2010-07-22
| Subject: Re: Suiton Giant Tue Aug 03, 2010 2:38 pm | |
| -Denied-
You can summon a Giant Water Man that drains you majorly, and you touch him to regenerate your chakra? Uhhh .. no. | |
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Xion Hokage
Posts : 31 Join date : 2010-07-22
| Subject: Re: Suiton Giant Tue Aug 03, 2010 7:55 pm | |
| You need to detail out the exact chakra toll. You also need to list the size in feet as well. | |
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[-Λսรէﻨռ-] Wandering Ninja
Posts : 31 Join date : 2010-07-25
| Subject: Re: Suiton Giant Tue Aug 03, 2010 7:59 pm | |
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Xion Hokage
Posts : 31 Join date : 2010-07-22
| Subject: Re: Suiton Giant Tue Aug 03, 2010 8:02 pm | |
| You say you need to be near a large body of water in order to summon it. Yet, you also say you can create it even when not around a large body of water? That does not make too much sense. | |
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[-Λսรէﻨռ-] Wandering Ninja
Posts : 31 Join date : 2010-07-25
| Subject: Re: Suiton Giant Tue Aug 03, 2010 8:04 pm | |
| for some people they need a large body of water example: if i taught it to someone they would need a large body of water, yet i have mastered it and can use it with no water around. Much like the water dragon. | |
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Xion Hokage
Posts : 31 Join date : 2010-07-22
| Subject: Re: Suiton Giant Tue Aug 03, 2010 8:10 pm | |
| You need to detail out how many posts it lasts for and list it within the jutsu. Also, it does not appear to have a real downside to it. It needs to have some sort of a weakness. | |
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Xion Hokage
Posts : 31 Join date : 2010-07-22
| Subject: Re: Suiton Giant Tue Aug 03, 2010 8:52 pm | |
| Explain what is it capable of taking chakra from. | |
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[-Λսรէﻨռ-] Wandering Ninja
Posts : 31 Join date : 2010-07-25
| Subject: Re: Suiton Giant Tue Aug 03, 2010 8:55 pm | |
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Zaraki
Posts : 39 Join date : 2010-07-14
| Subject: Re: Suiton Giant Tue Aug 03, 2010 9:51 pm | |
| Woah woah no draining chakra from plants and stuff that is basically senjutsu without the extra power boosts. And the suiton giant at best would last four posts if you used a large body of water if you directly created the water to use more like two posts Tetsu and I have discussed this. | |
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[-Λսรէﻨռ-] Wandering Ninja
Posts : 31 Join date : 2010-07-25
| Subject: Re: Suiton Giant Tue Aug 03, 2010 9:52 pm | |
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Zaraki
Posts : 39 Join date : 2010-07-14
| Subject: Re: Suiton Giant Tue Aug 03, 2010 9:54 pm | |
| No I said four the amount of chakra it would take to mold water into that shape would be quite a bit and to hold ot together while controlling it would be even worse. if you directly create that much water your using a ton of chakra as well thats why if you do it like that only two posts. | |
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[-Λսรէﻨռ-] Wandering Ninja
Posts : 31 Join date : 2010-07-25
| Subject: Re: Suiton Giant Tue Aug 03, 2010 9:55 pm | |
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Zaraki
Posts : 39 Join date : 2010-07-14
| Subject: Re: Suiton Giant Tue Aug 03, 2010 9:57 pm | |
| You can't take chakra from water vapor as water is not a living being it contains no chakra. | |
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[-Λսรէﻨռ-] Wandering Ninja
Posts : 31 Join date : 2010-07-25
| Subject: Re: Suiton Giant Tue Aug 03, 2010 9:59 pm | |
| y cant i take it from grass and such? | |
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Zaraki
Posts : 39 Join date : 2010-07-14
| Subject: Re: Suiton Giant Tue Aug 03, 2010 10:01 pm | |
| Taking energy/chakra from ones surroundings like plants and nature is senjutsu or sage art basically what your doing is being a wannabe sage without the extra power boost so no. | |
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[-Λսรէﻨռ-] Wandering Ninja
Posts : 31 Join date : 2010-07-25
| Subject: Re: Suiton Giant Tue Aug 03, 2010 10:02 pm | |
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Zaraki
Posts : 39 Join date : 2010-07-14
| Subject: Re: Suiton Giant Tue Aug 03, 2010 10:04 pm | |
| I see no problem with it now so until further notice APPROVED | |
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[-Λսรէﻨռ-] Wandering Ninja
Posts : 31 Join date : 2010-07-25
| Subject: Re: Suiton Giant Wed Aug 04, 2010 2:17 pm | |
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- Name: Electromagnetic murder- kunai
Rank: B
Type: nin,supplementary
Element: Lightning
Description:Kaizen uses lightning release:electromagnetic Murder then launches Kunai-shuriken through the lightning the lightining enhances their cutting power as well as disguesses them, while the enemy is focused on the lightning their not expecting the shuriken-kunai, thats about it.
RP Sample: Kaizen was in a fight with a nin of hisown village, he didnt wanna kill him but he was gonna atleast show hm not to mess with him.
- Kaizen used lightning release electromagnetic murder
- then launched several kunai, shuriken, into the lightning, his opponent was focused on doging the lightning, but didnt expect the kunai and shuriken that pierced his body, he fell to the ground and was soon carried to a hospital by some of the villagers watching.
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Zaraki
Posts : 39 Join date : 2010-07-14
| Subject: Re: Suiton Giant Wed Aug 04, 2010 2:19 pm | |
| looks fine to me a bit sloppy but fine APPROVED | |
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[-Λսรէﻨռ-] Wandering Ninja
Posts : 31 Join date : 2010-07-25
| Subject: Re: Suiton Giant Wed Aug 04, 2010 5:33 pm | |
| Name: kibou tameni sendo(wish for death)
Rank:S
Type:Gen
Element: N/A
Description: The jutsu is activated by looking into the eyes of the opponent, once activated the jutsu makes the target want to die. It makes the opponent do stuff to try to get himself killed, he will use his own actions to try and kill himself . This jutsu last 5 post.
RP Sample: Kaizen's village was being attacked by a single Akat and he was tired of it, he approached the man, activating his Sharingan he looked the man in the eyes activating his genjutsu kibou tameni sendo the man would now try to die by him injuring himself, the man began to stab himself with a kuani, he had killed himself and the threat was over.
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DarkChaosPriestess Genin
Posts : 32 Join date : 2010-07-20 Age : 32
| Subject: Re: Suiton Giant Wed Aug 04, 2010 6:00 pm | |
| - [-Λսรէﻨռ-] wrote:
- Name: kibou tameni sendo(wish for death)
Rank:S
Type:Gen
Element: N/A
Description: The jutsu is activated by looking into the eyes of the opponent, once activated the jutsu makes the target want to die. It makes the opponent do stuff to try to get himself killed, he will use his own actions to try and kill himself while no trying to avoid any attacks. This jutsu last 5 post.
RP Sample: Kaizen's village was being attacked by a single Akat and he was tired of it, he approached the man, activating his Sharingan he looked the man in the eyes activating his genjutsu kibou tameni sendo the man would now try to die by him injuring himself and by not trying to dodge any incoming attacks. Kaizen then used his fire dragon flame missile technique to kill the man, their was no dodging, he was dead.
Nice idea. Overpowered with the ability to attack while the Genjutsu is still active. Denied. | |
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[-Λսรէﻨռ-] Wandering Ninja
Posts : 31 Join date : 2010-07-25
| Subject: Re: Suiton Giant Wed Aug 04, 2010 6:05 pm | |
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[-Λսรէﻨռ-] Wandering Ninja
Posts : 31 Join date : 2010-07-25
| Subject: Re: Suiton Giant Wed Aug 04, 2010 6:14 pm | |
| Name: sakasa genzou (reverse vision) Rank: A
Type: Gen
Element:N/A
Description: This jutsu is activated by looking into the opponents eyes, the jutsu makes the recipient see threw their kaizens eyes once in this fake vision they see their opponent instead of himself, and begin attacking himself, this jutsu doesnt effect Kaizen this jutsu last 5 post.
RP Sample: Kaizen looked into the mans eyes casting his sakasa genzou genjutsu his enemy began looking through Kaizens eyes, it wouldnt affect kaizen, the man soon began attacking himself causing severe damage to himself, kaizen then finished him off.
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Zaraki
Posts : 39 Join date : 2010-07-14
| Subject: Re: Suiton Giant Wed Aug 04, 2010 6:36 pm | |
| Both denied due to the fact that you have no genjutsu skill specialty and these are high ranked genjutsu. | |
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