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PostSubject: Renji Takato   Renji Takato Icon_minitimeWed Jul 14, 2010 5:45 pm

Basic Character Information:

Name:
Renji, Takato
-Nickname:
16
Golden Beast
Mirror master
Age:
17
Gender:
Male
Clan:
Takato
Looks:
Renji Takato Aivva_10
Personality:
Quiet-
Renji is a very naturally quiet person, no one knows why. Some find it creepy others could careless. He just prefers to speak when he knows for a fact he is not wasting his breath. He just watches, he thinks a lot of times it doesn’t have to be words between one another. When quiet he focus a lot better with out it start being hard. That’s why he loves it when it’s quiet. He can do better thinking and things of the such.
Battle-
In the beginning of a fight he fights using straight Taijutsu at first probably using his blades for a fast finish or just because he have second thoughts about using his fight or feet. Throwing off there opponent but at the same time amazing them with his speed and power using physical power alone. Then when realizing it take a little more then a few kicks and punches, probably showing a single Kinjutsu or 2 to change the whole battle field around or something of the sorts showing amazing power, if it isn’t enough he would move in with Ninjutsu and tags of explosion. He enjoy battle deeply, as if he was dancing or something, he does the usual no emotion of the face. But he enjoy the rush knowing he can dodge what ever he can, he is happy knowing because of his Doujutsu he is easily able to take down Genjutsu masters due to him being immune to it. Explosive tags and his blades are his passion of fighting. Its rare if he talks while fighting, it shows your either interesting or your strong.
Traveling-
As a Missing ninja he is able to travel, anywhere he wants to. Although due to his escape of the Sound village he is known as “experiment #16, pure gold beast” Due to his rare bloodline of his chakra being golden. He is not really seen in the main villages area unless he is highly bored or there is a purpose. Stealing for him is something he only do if needed. He is just a fighter, he fights. But he does understand what it means to be a ninja so if needed he will use his shinobi tactics.


Basic Clan Information:

Clan Name:
Takato Clan
Kekkei Genkai:
~Jigen Ichi~
The first stage of the Tomokenzangan is actually called a Jigen, meaning Dimension. This is the first stage, meaning it is the first Jigan activated. When this Kekkei Genkai is activated, The ninja's eyes flash yellow and their chakra becomes golden. Then their eyes becomes golden to match the color of their chakra. The ninja can then use them to focus in and out on a target from afar. The shinobi's focusing capabilities are so great that if concentrating perfectly you are able to zoom and see right through an object. As well as being able to zoom in, the ninja will gain great perception being able to dodge attacks with more ease then a normal ninja would without using some type of jutsu. A clan member must be pushed feeling an intense rush of emotion and confusion for them to obtain the Shinkou Kanchi or the Tomokenzangan.



Jigen Ni
The second stage of the Tomokenzangan. The ninja's pupils gains slits that go horizontally and vertically. Somewhat resembling that of a cross however vision remains normal. When the second jigan is activated, The eyes will be able to give the ninja the abilities of a sensor. Unlike other shinobi sensors that does not weild the Tomokenzangan, It is able to pick up traces of chakra from where it was last used because it will have a significant color or distinct appearence. It will allow the user to see chakra and also sense it. It can even be traced back to the ninja if a significant amount of chakra is used for tracking purposes. During battle, This doujutsu level or jigan is used to be able to root chakra signatures out easily, meaning the ninja of this technique can see through clones, Concealing techniques and being underground. Also in this stage,the ninja's perception is also enhanced to a good deal, better than the first Jigaen. Also, the ninja gains the ability of enhanced attributes. To obtain this level of Jigen, the clan member must endure intense physical pain from another person.




Jigen San
The third and last Jigan of the Tomokenzangan. In this state of the doujutsu, The ninja's eyes gain to slits that comes down from angles. By this, the user's eyes should resemble that of a six pointed star. In this state, The ninja will have a great resistance to genjutsu. As the opponent attempts to trap the ninja within a weak genjutsu depending on the rank of the genjutsu. The ninja can shoot a glare at the opponent trying to trap the ninja in the genjutsu, dispelling it. He can also create a wave of chakra that will dispell a genjutsu already in play. If the ninja concentrates hard enough, The ninja can even flip the Genjutsu around and use it as his own reversing the effects and bring it upon the opponent. In addition to the doujutsu, The user can locate and use loose chakra using the second jigen's ability and able to harness it to use as his own or to replenish his chakra or stamina. Also in this state, the ninja can copy speeds of a target that catches their eye. Analyzing data of their speed and motor skills, this allows the ninja to copy their speed of their movements and add it own to his very own. However if it's too fast then the body cannot be use to the speed if it isn't natural. Causing strain on the body if used too many times and recklessly. To obtain this level of Jigen, the ninja must experience a near death experience including nearly dying from that experience.



~Kagirinai Jigen~
The jigen goes to a much larger scale as it now gives the ninja massive amounts of chakra storage for use. The points on the tips of the slits are connected with a line. Making a six pointed star within circle. It also gives the ninja the ability to see through the eyes of an opponent or target. It allows him to see what his opponent sees and what he saw but not what he heard. This is done when the ninja changes their vision to whoever they choose. However in this state they cannot move while looking through the eyes of another person. Lastly this allows the obtainer to gain their own skill or ability of their choosing. Rather it be mastery of a ninja art or any sort of thing. To obtain this eye the opponent must betray and kill their closest friend or family member by simply killing them with their own hands, weapons or techniques. However by gaining this you lose your ability to see slowly and you become completely numb but after you become blind.




~Hateshinai Jigen~
The Hateshinai Jigen is the ultimate. After obtaining this eye you regain vision and feeling in the body. The iris is gold, the pupil is in the form of a six pointed star within a circle and now the sclera is completely black. It is the most powerful jigen and it allows you to know and create kinjutsu without having any downfalls. The reason for this is because after all the grief to obtain the other jigens, reaching this would mostlikely make you hated in the ninja world. Feared and unloved because they know you are ruthless enough to take the eyes of an own family member. Yes, to obtain this eye you must implant the eyes of another clan members into your very own but only AFTER you become blind and numb, leaving only a destined few to achieve this Jigen. If you do survive it living and obtaining another eye of a clan member only then you will gain your senses back and the ability to create, and use the effects of kinjutsu techniques or powerful techniques to a certain degree.
Clan Symbol:
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Clan History:
[The Takato Clan originated within the land of waters. More directly within the village hidden in the mist. Or the Hidden Mist Village. Either way it's still Kirigakure No Sato. After the discovery of the Mist village. It started as one of the very first Doujutsu in the beginning of the ninja world. Not as powerful as the Sharingan. The Tomokenzangan devolped within the body of a young man named Megumi Takato. Megumi is and was the very first Takato to ever exist. During creation of the Hidden Mist Village he joined in helping build the Hidden Mist village with his own two hands. He made alot of friends and helped alot of people. He believed in hard work and kindness builds a character. Makes them stronger than the typical revenge and such. His Tomokenzangan made a mark to not toy around with Megumi. For it was a mutation within his genetics that given him this doujutsu. Now he is the very first to start a generation of ninja who will share his discovery. He fell in love with the First Mizukage's Sister. She was very powerful to be honesnt and he respected that. He was more attracted to the strong and independant woman. He and her got married however he then made friends with the first Mizukage. He and the Mizukage would battle from time to time, training to become even stronger and help the village. Megumi became one of the Mizukage's "Chosen ones" in which he and more selected few would help the Mizukage protect the village and it's people. The Mizukage already had in mind to select Megumi as the new Kage after he had died or given up the position. Megumi wasn't looking forward to being the Mizukage. He wanted a normal life with his wife and his new born children. He was already a Kiri official. He didn't want the rank of Kage. Megumi grew up in the time of the birth of civilization and he is glad he experienced that. He never would want to see the fall of Civilization. Emotionally, Megumi was weak. This is proven when he finally gets to hold his twin boys within his arms and love them dearly however he is then chosen to become the new Mizukage. He refused the offer for he did not wish to live such a drastic life of being responsible for so many lives. He was just learning how to be responsible for his children lives. They attempted to force the position on him. The villagers needing a leader but Megumi didn't want to be that leader. He cracked under pressure. He told the children he loved them as he kissed his wife goodbye and walked out the door. Never to be found again. It said he took up a life of hiding, suffering in a sea of pain and guilt as he left his children and wife because he was too afraid to make a choice. A decision that could have either ruined many lives or benefited many. Either way, it was a lose-lose situation for Megumi. Never to be seen again ~



The new members of the slowly growing clan. The children of the shameful Megumi Takato. Those who loved him, now despise him. Mostlikely they will dislike his children aswell. Well the twin Takato children of Megumi and his wife were under watch by the villagers. Rumors spreading around that they will be just like Megumi. Afraid to face their duties and make life changing decisions. So what? The children were told the story of their father at a young age. However they understood quite well. One twin, named Kagura disliked the situation. Kagura disliked his village and all it's people. He knew he couldn't get his mother on his side of leaving the village so he attempted to persuage his brother Yuzu. Yuzu is a sweet and kind young boy. He attempts to go around and helping the villagers in need but usually gets shut down by the people. He walks him in tears as it seems no one likes him. Then he met a young female, she was quite beautiful in his eyes. He felt butterflies in his stomach when he saw her. He found a reason to live on. He wanted to impress her in everyway. It was his first crush, give him a break. Kagura and Yuzu trained infront of another group of young ninja. Yuzu attempting to impress his crush, he goes all out but Kagura quickly defeats Yuzu with ease. He was embarrassed but he didn't get angry at his brother. His brother on the other hand thought his brother tried to kill him. Yuzu holding out his hand in respect and to give his brother his props, Kagura smacks the hand away and walks off. Yuzu didn't know what to say, the crush running up to him and gave him a hug. He felt good yet worried about his brother. He saw evil in his eyes. As the two grew up. They trained intensely, gaining higher and higher levels of the Jigen. Kagura reached the Kagirinai Jigen. He was dubbed the strongest Takato in the village, and obviously the strongest Takato at that time. Seeing as it only been him and his brother. Then his father, it seems his father had more than a wife. It seemed he had women on the side and that's why alot of people dislike Megumi. The Takato clan seemed to grow in numbers with little notice seeing as it was only suppose to be Megumi and his children. Now it's over a hundred as time passed. Kagura was the strongest of them all. Weilding the Kagirnai Jigen while his brother did not. His brother wanted a regular life but Kagura wanted power and more of it. He used his Kagirinai Jigen to rage war with other clans outside of the village, only to be defeated once by a rival clan and thats because Kagura went blind. He lost his vision. As he and other defeated clan members walk about the Kirigakure, Defeated. On the way back, Kagura was becoming numb. He thought he was dieing but infact he wasn't. It was just the effects of the Kagirinai Jigen. On his "Death Bed" He was crying along with his twin brother and other Takato and friends of the Takato by his side. Kagura said, "I'm dieing....I can't feel anything. I can't see anything...I wonder what's happening to me, Yuzu. I miss seeing the faces of my clan members. The village symbol and the smile on people faces." He said as he begin to close his eyes, breathing heavily from wounds he recieved in battle. Kagura's crush which now is his wife suggested getting him another person's eyes. That way his last seconds of life he will be able to see everyone that was there to comfort him. Yuzu offered himself but was denied by the one person that loved Kagura. It was a female Takato who always loved Kagura from the very beginning. She offered her own eyes for the sake of the clan and for the sake of Kagura. Yuzu didn't approve but she made sense. If Kagura was to die, Yuzu would need his eyes to take over the control of the clan. The clan members had to restrain Yuzu as the rest proceeded with the eye transplant surgery. It was a success but and a truly good one. Kagura gained a new form of Jigen. Kagura regained feeling and vision and he reclaimed leadership of the clan. However his crush couldn't see his face anymore. She was taken care of by the clan members under Kagura's command. Kagura retired from the constant threats on other clans and started to create his own religion instead. It was a simple idea that started a cult slowly after the death of Yuzu and the birth of Yuzu's children. Kagura had a child with the woman that gave her eyes just to knew her lover will be able to see once again. She died shortly after the birth of her second child. After Kirigakure's conflict with KKG clans and regular shinobi ~ The Takato clan and a few others had to vanish from the Hidden Mist village and separate in different places across the ninja world. Some going as far away from Kirigakure No Sato as Possible, some still staying remotely close. It seems that after leaving Kirigakure the clan members attract butterflies with them and thus started the Takato Butterfly rumors about how the Takato Clan spirit lives within the butterfly.]

Link:
http://narutor.heavenforum.org/approved-clans-f31/takato-clan-t34.htm#111

Rank Information:

Rank:
A-Ranked Missing ninja
Village:
-

Skill Information:

Skill Specialty:
Primary: Ninjutsu
Secondary: Kinjutsu
Elemental Affinity:
Primary Element: Fuuton
Secondary Element: Raiton
Special Characteristics:
Combat Strengths:
-3 chakra pools of chakra
-Great Power of Kinjutsu
-Incredible natural speed
-Chakra absorption
Combat Weaknesses:
-Summoning
-Blindness
-Katon Release
-Puppets
Jutsus:

Name:
Type:
Rank:
Element:
Description:

Jutsu will be posted in registration
Weapons:
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Chakra_Disruption_Blades

History and RP Sample:
History:
In a Unknown location a child was born, but this wasn’t any child. A special child that is very important to the world in many ways, he was the heir to his clan. Successor and destined for greatness, his brothers and sisters are unknown because when born he was not raised by his family. He was raised by the strongest of the clan himself; it was a highly great honor to be in the same presence as the strongest most deadly members of the clan and not to be executed by him. He was a father to him, because of it he was given a choose to skip the ninja academy and go straight training. He didn’t quite liked people, so he chose to train under him. Renji called him Hoji for some strange reason. Renji went from age 2 walking to age 7 walking onto water, his training begin to get harder.


Getting there: {Gennin Arc Part One}
They begin traveling the world making his training more realistic, once there he was then assigned by Hoji to steal certain things from rouge groups and run getting away from them. This training session increased his speed and Reaction time as well as using his environment greatly. It showed him how to control the problem and mold it into his own making his own past, being able to concentrate while in the rush of attacks. Once 9 his speed was pass anyone who dared tried to run from him, that’s when he begin to work on defense, and that’s when it got hard. He was barraged with all kinds of techniques. Then Hoji came up with a idea for him that might work, he realized if used his speed it would be nothing he couldn’t evade or dodge. With a thought like that in mind he begin to train in dodging, with that thought of training at age 11 he was able to dodge nearly anything that comes in his path, that was his defensive style.


The ambush :{Gennin Arc Part Two}
About three miles away from the Land of Lightning was seen Renji walking, it was a pretty large area nothing but grass. Renji couldn’t help but to feel awkward. He was sent to take a walk and think, then to come back and meet Hoji, he stopped suddenly feeling the ground shake he took one step back realizing that it was less when he went backwards the ground begin to crack. Around that time is when Renji said fuck it and begin doing back flips until something began to emerge from the cracks. Looking upwards a large creature with 4 arms, two legs and a outward head and on top of it was Hoji instructing this was the beginning of his Kekkai Genkai training, with that said he was barraged at by the creature. He was able to dodge some of them but when it slammed the ground the pressure sent him flying to a tree. He begin to breath hard as he stood up, his hair in the way of his eyes due to his speed he was never use to getting hit so it would hurt him deeply if he were to take just a little damage meaning he was pretty gentle. He ran towards it in a what it seemed like blind rage, once got close enough then waiting for the thing to attack he would run up his arms placing explosive tags on his arms so fast Hoji had to concentrate to keep up himself. Once done with the arm he would get under his chin placing three Kunai with explosive tags on them he would drop completely while the other arm reaches to grab Renji once he hit the ground a massive explosion took place above him, the creature fell down backwards will Renji just stood there with the hair blocking his eyes Hoji did not know what he had gained. Renji deactivated it before Hoji could see his eyes, secretly gaining power that Hoji already had, with that he was given special chakra blades.


The escape: {Chuunin Arc Part One}
Hoji sent him on his own once he showed him how the blades work and how Renji would be able to use them to his advantage, Renji is able to after using the blades is able to absorb the chakra its disturbing with was good. Something even Hoji was not able to do, first stop for Renji alone was Grass village for some strange reason. He wanted to attack some Gennin to see how far he would be able to make by doing so. Once there he waited in the outskirts until a team of Gennin were spotted by Renji, using his Kekkai Genkai he zoomed in, using this for marksmanship he lunched a blade at him catching him in his shoulder tagging him into a tree, then Renji appeared on the blade showing a more evil look on him. The rest ran, he moved in to catch them. They got a few more meters before stopping due to Renji being in front of them showing that they were not going to get away with running. In a instant he attacked them but then did not kill them, went back to the Gennin stuck to the tree and absorb the chakra from him until he begin to be pale. Then made his departure, from the area while being chased by ANBU of the grass. Enjoying the chase until he remembered he could never get caught. Traveling until he found himself in the land of Rice fields. With that he was ambushed, he was able to take down the first and second patch squad but the rest was to many and he didn’t even have a elemental nature yet. He was captured and experimented by the Sound village Leader, the Fuuinjutsu master of the village accidentally split his chakra up into 3 different groups making it small. He didn’t notice it until the Sound village leader assistant explained it to him. Then they decided to use his Kekkai Genkai for power. So they infused more chakra into his chakra groups all equal. Meaning he was chuunin level, had chuunin level chakra in 8 places making him having 3 chakra pools in all making him a lot much more of a beast. But it all backfired once he gained that chakra he woke but he had his eyes closed as if something was wrong. So when the time was right, He broke out of his ceil after absorbing about 6 peoples chakra pools. As he was seen running down a strange path looking around trying to see what’s actually there. It seemed to be no end.


Awaken: {Chuunin arc Part two}
He made a swift right turn only to hear someone running following him for some reason. He was not having it, slapping explosive tags on the walls as he moved he could see a bright light he moved in faster and jumped. The Impact of the explosion would push him all the way forward, Under him was a pit as he was drifting through the air making his landing. He then picked up the paste once realizing his little follower was not letting up on him at all. He saw another light but before anything happened he placed one more explosive tag on the ground instead of the wall, once made it he looked around to see it was a stadium, he looked up to see he had made it alive, Almost. Once on the verge of leaving he was confronted by the Sound village Leader himself. The battle heated up, it was a great battle but in the end it seem he was able to tie him for a moment until he unlocked his Jigen San, then he completely turned the battle around making him more powerful as he smashed his opponent nearly killing him, but departing before anything else can happen. Once made it back to Hoji he started his elemental training once complete he was assigned to fight him and once done Renji had accidentally killed him gaining something he never wanted or think he could get.
Rp Sample:

The Captain of the sensory squad was sent on a mission, this mission was a kind of mission that Roku normally wouldn’t f*** with. He was sitting in his house just got done taking a shower. Roku could never go dirty in anything he did which was a habit but then again a good thing. Roku packing up his swords on his back laid the scroll given by his Raikage down on the ground once he got outside. He locked his door in his house. He kicked the scroll open, he looked at it. It seems he had a assassination mission across the mountains. He sighed wondering what kind of opponents will be dealt with, if the Jounin of the squads couldn’t handle it. It could be a bit troublesome, tactics will probably be used on Roku but he knew it wouldn’t work on him. Once understanding the risk and difficulty with the mission at hand he knew he had a job to do. Closing up the scroll he begin walking around the village until he came up with the perfect plan. Making his way up to the mountains he quickly using the transformation jutsu, he making himself look like a gennin. This plan would be perfect, he would hop up to a place of the mountains and begin walking seeing a large crater in front of him he looked around to see the mountains, nothing more. He scanned the area with his sensory abilities finding nothing at all, he knew they were around somewhere. He had a headband on so he couldn’t get his hearing abilities in place with out that ability he keep moving into the mountains further more. As a Jounin he should have been done with the mission Ugh this is getting annoying I can’t find anyth- his train of mind was cut off due to something catching his attention. To the left side of his body was a pathway, the right yet another pathway but in the middle something different. But before he could even think to investigate something with chakra was falling from the sky at a fast attempt to hit Roku. Roku already using his sensory technique jumped back at least 3 meters sliding stopping himself, the attack was fatal; you would be able to tell by the Smoke coming from the attack into the ground. Roku could not see what kind of attack or who was attacking until the smoke cleared. A female wearing all white with a War hammer in her hand. He knew she was no ordinary person; she threw her hammer like it was nothing towards Roku in a more twisting way. Roku at a good attempt to dodge it leaped into the air only to have it following him into the air using her chakra. He sensed the level; it was High-Chuunin, Low Special-Jounin. Understanding that doing a flip landing on the ground the hammer went right back into the females hands. Roku sighing for a moment he begin running while doing hand seals making 2 clones used to confuse her. She swung her hammer as the real Roku Jumped backwards using the clones they went away quickly using his Harmonic Gloves sending Vibrations waves to her ear as she went to her knees in pain of the power of sound. Roku leaping into the air with a spinning axel kick she went down tumbling passed out. He used the time to get to the cliff he was going to the first time when he felt it before being rudely interrupted. Getting to the end, he showed a face of anger when he transformed into himself. “I’m not stupid.” He said performing a hand seal releasing the genjutsu ”A-Ranked genjutsu huh” Only way he was able to notice that was down the cliff it was a lot of Chakra signatures below and it wasn’t all the way down there either. It transformed back into its original form, which was a large cave or cave in it should be said with one little entrance down on it. It wasn’t that deep but good enough to jump for the jounin Roku. Leaping off it quickly doing a slight flip landing on the ground where the entrance awaited for him. Grabbing his main sword which is longer then his other one, running through the entrance only to find himself standing in a stadium or something of the such, looking to the sky he saw three ninjas jumping down landing in front of Roku. He could feel there chakra level, it was about as high as his. He knew something of the sorts would happen. The first one was large with a special kind of Yellow Armor on him. The others appearance wasn’t important. ”Who ever you are it matters little…You are here and for that you shall be drained of your chakra and executed” Spoke the large one. With out another word they all ran towards him quickly with out wasting any time. Roku doing a twist using his Sound chakra and his sword swung pushing them all backwards. But the big one, doing three punch’s knocking back out of the entrance onto a wall. Roku got up and before he could attack the man was already in front of him he raised his hand up signaling his fingers Roku all of a sudden was knocked into the air back onto the mountain sides. Roku was feed up now, once the man got up to the top where Roku was he was knocked into the air by Roku three second kick which involved him kicking him in the stomach leg then getting down and kicking him into the air. Leaping into the air he begins tormenting him with kicks slamming him all the way back down the cave. Landing on top of him. He made his way back into the entrance where they begin running towards him yet again, they didn’t notice he threw a bomb pass them until it exploded slinging him towards him as he charged up his sword with Sound sending a wave through his sword knocking them all down nearly killing them. Finishing the rest in seconds all of them were dead. “Mission Complete” he said heading back to the village.



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PostSubject: Re: Renji Takato   Renji Takato Icon_minitimeWed Jul 14, 2010 8:36 pm

-Unbeatable Speed? It can't be 'unbeatable'

- In your weaknesses it says Blindness,He is blind correct?
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PostSubject: Re: Renji Takato   Renji Takato Icon_minitimeWed Jul 14, 2010 10:45 pm

-That will be changed
-He suffers from blindness, like Itachi when he use MS to much. Sometimes his vision gets blurry he is slowly losing it.
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PostSubject: Re: Renji Takato   Renji Takato Icon_minitimeWed Jul 14, 2010 10:55 pm

please use the character template provided
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PostSubject: Re: Renji Takato   Renji Takato Icon_minitimeWed Jul 14, 2010 11:31 pm

Quote :
'If the ninja concentrates hard enough, The ninja can even flip the Genjutsu around and use it as his own reversing the effects and bring it upon the opponent'

yeah it resembles the sharingans mirror heaven skill,almost to the T

Quote :
It is the most powerful jigen and it allows you to know and create kinjutsu without having any downfalls.'
'Yes, to obtain this eye you must implant the eyes of another clan members into your very own but only AFTER you become blind and numb, leaving only a destined few to achieve this Jigen. If you do survive it living and obtaining another eye of a clan member only then you will gain your senses back and the ability to create, and use the effects of kinjutsu techniques or powerful techniques to a certain degree.'

Everything about this screams knock off of the sharingan,and no draw backs anywhere,as long as you have rp'd you should have known better.

you go numb and blind for a bit but then it all comes back ¬¬ meaning there are NO negatives,its not acceptable.


Not approved,sorry.Come up with something more original
And if you cant just join the uchiha clan
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PostSubject: Re: Renji Takato   Renji Takato Icon_minitimeWed Jul 14, 2010 11:56 pm

Zero Uchiha wrote:
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'If the ninja concentrates hard enough, The ninja can even flip the Genjutsu around and use it as his own reversing the effects and bring it upon the opponent'

yeah it resembles the sharingans mirror heaven skill,almost to the T

Quote :
It is the most powerful jigen and it allows you to know and create kinjutsu without having any downfalls.'
'Yes, to obtain this eye you must implant the eyes of another clan members into your very own but only AFTER you become blind and numb, leaving only a destined few to achieve this Jigen. If you do survive it living and obtaining another eye of a clan member only then you will gain your senses back and the ability to create, and use the effects of kinjutsu techniques or powerful techniques to a certain degree.'

Everything about this screams knock off of the sharingan,and no draw backs anywhere,as long as you have rp'd you should have known better.

you go numb and blind for a bit but then it all comes back ¬¬ meaning there are NO negatives,its not acceptable.


Not approved,sorry.Come up with something more original
And if you cant just join the uchiha clan


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Ok first you just went straight ham on my app like it was nothing. I feel as if I did something wrong, and if the clan was approved why you slam it all on my app, it was for CHARACTER...you should have posted in on my.....OMG I don't see why this is a problem but know what.....
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PostSubject: Re: Renji Takato   Renji Takato Icon_minitimeThu Jul 15, 2010 12:01 am

In your words this is aubreys clan right?Well in which case aubrey approved his own clan.You just posted it for him.So i am voiding that clan from being approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Renji Takato   Renji Takato Icon_minitimeThu Jul 15, 2010 1:03 am

Approved
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PostSubject: Re: Renji Takato   Renji Takato Icon_minitimeThu Jul 15, 2010 8:00 am

Zak I thought no more rogues e.e
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PostSubject: Re: Renji Takato   Renji Takato Icon_minitimeThu Jul 15, 2010 8:59 pm

I promised him a spot for all the Trouble I caused. Hes the last one.
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PostSubject: Re: Renji Takato   Renji Takato Icon_minitimeSat Jul 31, 2010 8:06 pm

Unapproved for the Over powered mirror techniques
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PostSubject: Re: Renji Takato   Renji Takato Icon_minitimeThu Aug 05, 2010 2:07 am

Btw, this will stay unapproved until you remove the mirrors or have a logical way of how he turned his chakra into mirrors anyway. You compared them to haku's demonic mirrors but yet, your mirrors ARENT ICE ... and your kkg has nothing to do with mirrors whatsoever. Last time i checked people can't randomly turn their chakra into mirrors ... -_-
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PostSubject: Re: Renji Takato   Renji Takato Icon_minitimeThu Aug 05, 2010 3:47 am

._. Umm well this is my art, like deidara with his clay, and I will be explaining it. So you can't unapprove my character....you have to take this up with my jutsu list
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PostSubject: Re: Renji Takato   Renji Takato Icon_minitimeThu Aug 05, 2010 4:35 pm

Bump
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PostSubject: Re: Renji Takato   Renji Takato Icon_minitimeThu Aug 05, 2010 4:42 pm

Xion wrote:
Unapproved for the Over powered mirror techniques

They're in a different section, yes? Well, do the work there, not here. Character stays approved. Jutsu will be reviewed in the Jutsu topic.
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PostSubject: Re: Renji Takato   Renji Takato Icon_minitimeFri Aug 13, 2010 2:00 pm

[ Fábio here ~

Denied. Clan is unnaproved so unless clan is changed. ]
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PostSubject: Re: Renji Takato   Renji Takato Icon_minitimeSat Aug 14, 2010 6:26 pm

LOL this is go late...I'm making a remake of this character
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