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|  Subject: Kaizen Uchiha  Mon Aug 02, 2010 3:15 pm | |
| Basic Info
Name: Kaizen Uchiha
Alias:
Age: 18
Gender:Male
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Appearance:
Personality: Is usually very laid back but when he's training he goes all out much like naruto.
Skill & Rank Info
Village: konoha
Rank: Jounin
Skill Specialty-Primary: Ninjutsu
Secondary: Doujutsu
Third: Kenjutsu
Chakra Element: Fire, lightning,water
Jutsu
Fire jutsu
- Spoiler:
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Style%3A_Fire_Ball_Jutsu B
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Style%3A_Phoenix_Flower_Jutsu B
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release%3A_Fire_Dragon_Flame_Missile A
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release%3A_Flame_Bullet B
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release:_Flame_Flower A
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release:_Great_Dragon_Fire_Technique S
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Hanz%C5%8D%27s_Exploding_Tag_Technique A
Lightning jutsu - Spoiler:
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Lightning_Destruction A
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Lightning_Release:_Electromagnetic_Murder B
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Lightning_Release:_Wave_of_Inspiration B
water jutsu
- Spoiler:
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Kokuu_no_Jutsu
B
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_Great_Exploding_Water_Colliding_Wave A
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_Great_Shark_Missile_Technique A
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_Great_Waterfall_Technique
B
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_Snake%27s_Mouth A
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_Stormy_Blockade A
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_Syrup_Capture_Field C
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_Water_Dragon_Bullet_Technique
A
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_Water_Drowning_Technique
A
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_Water_Encampment_Wall
B
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_Water_Fang_Bullet
B
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_Water_Shark_Gun_Technique
A
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_Water_Wave_Palm C
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Replacement C
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Clone_Technique C
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Prison_Technique S
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_Exploding_Water_Colliding_Wave
Non elemenatal jutsu
- Spoiler:
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Body_flicker_technique D
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Invisibility_jutsu C
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Escape_Jutsu E
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Transformation_jutsu D
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Temporary_Paralysis_Technique B
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Shadow_Shuriken_Technique
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Manipulated_Shuriken_Technique
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Needle_Jiz%C5%8D
Customs- Spoiler:
http://narutor.heavenforum.org/jutsu-creation-f6/suiton-giant-t367.htm#3440
Weapons
Name:henryuuki
Appearance:
Rank: A
Special Abilities: Has extreme cutting power, it can also be infused with Kaizens chackra to make it very sharp able to cut through other swords, it can also strike extremely fast.
Origin:Was givin to him by the elders of the uchiha clan.
History & Roleplay Sample
History: Birth Arc- Spoiler:
Kaizen was born in konoha, into the uchiha clan by renji and mya uchiha.
Early Life
- Spoiler:
Kaizen had a good early life, it was great. He even at a young age already showed ninja skill, as he often seen holding a kunai rather then a raddle.
Pre-teen years- Spoiler:
Kaizen had already shown advance ninja skill at a very young age, but this is the time he began to realize his reue abilities.
Kaizen had met quite many friends among the uchiha's most of them were his age, he had a paticuliar best friend named ridan uchiha. They both had sharingan but neither had been activated, they were constantly training and learning new jutsu's from older uchihas. They enjoyed sparring against eachother, tho ridan usually won and very few times did Kaizen win. They often pushed eachother to their limits trying to make their sharingan's activate, tho one would never live to prevail.
Academy Arc- Spoiler:
It had been only a year after his mothers death when Kaizen would enter the academy, along with his friend ridan.
They entered and were put threw many test, anything from using basic academy jutsu to just flat out bookwork which Kaizen disliked, he thought it wasnt challenging enough for him. The bookwork was no trouble at all he would pass everything with flying colors, just as ridan would.
The basic jutsu was nothing as the other students were struggling with the basics Kaizen and ridan were excelling
at the most diffucult stuff the academy had to offer.
It wouldn't be long before the genin exams, Kaizen knew he would pass.
Genin Arc- Spoiler:
Kaizen had passed the exams along with his good friend Ridan, and they were placed in the same squad, they both liked their new sensei, who was very strict when he needed to be and a friend at other times.
They went on various missions together and did extensive training they each had honed there water, and fire skills yet they still hadnt activated their sharingan.
They continued training and going on missions with their sensei. They hadn't really been challenged by any of the missions they were all simple and very easy to complete.
Chuunin- Spoiler:
Kaizen had passed the fairly easy chuunin exams, they weren't that easy he had been pushed pretty far. But it wasnt anything to get worked up about.
Kaizen and Ridan countinued to train and spar and now Kaizen was usually the victor and Ridan seldom won, they were now stuck watching over genin and doing increasingly diffucult missions.
THE INCIDENT
Kaizen and his partner Ridan were sent on a simple mission or so they thought, they were just taking care of some simple buiseness for the Hokage.
It turned out to be an attempt on the Hokages life, an Akatsukie member appeared where Kaizen and Ridan were designated to be, they werent sure what to do but then they remembered, this person is evil and is in our village HE MUST DIE!
Kaizen and ridan were only chuunin but they were powerful and werent gonna let this Akat leave with his life, they prepared to fight.
The Akat moved first throwing several kunai and shuriken at the two, Kaizen quickly dodged as did Ridan.
They then moved at the same moment launching shuriken at the Akat in rapid speed of course this was quickly dodged by the Akat.
The akat sent abunch of fireballs aiimed straight for the pair, they were bothe hit, it only did minor damage.
Kaizen thought you gotta use something hes not expecting, he quickly told ridan ot keep the akat distracted, Kaizen only needed seconds.
He stuck his palms to the ground after a few seconds explosive tags were wrapped around the Akats ankles, they quickly exploded doing massive damage to his ankles.
Then the akat released an explosive fire jutsu, it ripped through Ridan, ridan fell to the ground-death was eminent.
Kaizen was put into a state of shock and emotional pain, he had been with Ridan most of his life, and he was about to leave him Kaizens sharingan activated, one eye had two tomoe and the other only one.
Ridan was fading quickly.
He had to end this quickly hethough as a shuriken ripped through his shoulder, he was gonna end this now.
He started off by using his lightning release-shadow clone, he summoned only one clone, thats all he would need.
The clone began attacking the Akat byeing Kaizen time he needed, Kaizen transformed some of his chackra into lightning while hitting the Akat in the back, flipping his nervous system. He wouldnt be able to fully control his body, it was time to make a big move, he converted more chackra into his left had and stuck his hand into the ground launching lightning through the ground ripping it apart in the direction of his enemy, the Akat ried to dodge but he wasnt in full control of his body. The lightning hit the Akat knocking him down, Kaizen went to checck on Ridan while the Akat was down, Ridan was dead.
Kaizen was frustrated and angry, enter my village, kill my best friend, you are going to die! Kaizen yelled loudly.
Kaizen compressed a large ammount of chackra inside his body before breathing out a large dragon, te Akat was still on the ground, Kaizen was gonna end this now, he manipulated the dragon, and slammed the huge fire dragon into the Akat delivering 3rd degree burns and death to the man.
Jounin - Spoiler:
It had been 2 years since Ridan had been killed, and Kaizen had been promoted to jounin by the Hokage, and had been training his Sharingan he now had three tomoe in each eye. He hadnt been granted permission to be a sensei due to fear of disrespect because of his young age,
He had gone on quite a few missions though.
One Day Kaizen decided to request permssion to travel to kiri,
He had a meeting with the Hokage and explained why he felt he needed to go too Kiri.
(I would like to go to kiri to visit some of the uchiha that live there, It will just a visit then ill be back)
(I see, you may go just return soon.)
After hearing that Kaizen left to kiri.
Where is he now? - Spoiler:
Kaizen lives in konoha Accasionaly visiting kiri.
Roleplay Sample: Kaizen Awoke to a rainy and misty morning in kiri and was greeted with a Hot cu of coffe and a bowl of beef and shrimp ramen, he quickly ate the bowl leaving nothing but a noodle left in the bowl.Kaizen then began to sip the tea it was quite awakening and refreshing.Kaizen then looked out of his window to see nothing but a deep fog.
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| | | | DarkChaosPriestess
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| | Subject: Re: Kaizen Uchiha Tue Aug 03, 2010 2:32 pm | |
| Ok... no on the sword. You're gon'na need Kenjutsu as a Specialty to have that awesome blade.
Denied for age. Too young.
Denied for the Custom Knives.
You didn't put the Template for Jutsu, hun. The reason we do that is to help distinguish between Ranks of Jutsu. Some Jutsu don't have labeled Ranks on Narupedia. That's why we do it. We need to label the Ranks. XD
You have Kokuu no Jutsu under the Katon Jutsu. It's Suiton. XD
Flame Flower... ranked B because you didn't put the right format. XD
Important Body Disturbance is reserved for Medical Offensive. Remove it.
Remove Raiton Kage Bunshin.
Wave of Inspiration is A-Ranked.
Remove Water Sky Convergence.
I'll find other things, but that's it for now. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Kaizen Uchiha Tue Aug 03, 2010 2:35 pm | |
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| | | | DarkChaosPriestess
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| | Subject: Re: Kaizen Uchiha Tue Aug 03, 2010 2:38 pm | |
| - [-Λսรէﻨռ-] wrote:
- Kokuu no Jutsu ?
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Kokuu_no_Jutsu You have that in there. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Kaizen Uchiha Tue Aug 03, 2010 2:57 pm | |
| i no and do u no the ranks for thse jutsu im not sure about them if so can u pm me or something so i can put it up? | |
| | | | DarkChaosPriestess
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| | Subject: Re: Kaizen Uchiha Tue Aug 03, 2010 3:08 pm | |
| - [-Λսรէﻨռ-] wrote:
- i no and do u no the ranks for thse jutsu im not sure about them if so can u pm me or something so i can put it up?
Guess, and I'll let you know when you're done. XD | |
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| | Subject: Re: Kaizen Uchiha Tue Aug 03, 2010 3:09 pm | |
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| | | | DarkChaosPriestess
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| | Subject: Re: Kaizen Uchiha Tue Aug 03, 2010 3:11 pm | |
| - [-Λսรէﻨռ-] wrote:
- im serious lol
I'm serious, too. This is a good exercise in creating Jutsu... Ranking them. So, do so. I'll let you know your accuracy when you're done. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Kaizen Uchiha Tue Aug 03, 2010 3:13 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: Kaizen Uchiha Tue Aug 03, 2010 3:20 pm | |
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| | | | DarkChaosPriestess
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| | Subject: Re: Kaizen Uchiha Tue Aug 03, 2010 3:25 pm | |
| - [-Λսรէﻨռ-] wrote:
- ok i guessed
Nononono... use the Template for the Jutsu, hun. ^^ | |
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| | Subject: Re: Kaizen Uchiha Tue Aug 03, 2010 3:27 pm | |
| uhhh why it takes way to long i gave all the same info in a small link plus i just added the ranks? | |
| | | | Xion
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| | Subject: Re: Kaizen Uchiha Tue Aug 03, 2010 3:51 pm | |
| Another thing, the Hokage would not just allow you to go to kiri because you want to visit the other Uchiha. I will need a more convincing reason please. Also, at 16 odds are you would have just made Jounin keep in mind kakashi was 14 or 15 when he became Jounin and he was a Genius. Please either change your age or explain how long he has been jounin and why he would have been made Jounin. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Kaizen Uchiha Tue Aug 03, 2010 7:52 pm | |
| No weak spot sending sword | |
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| | Subject: Re: Kaizen Uchiha Tue Aug 03, 2010 7:54 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: Kaizen Uchiha Tue Aug 03, 2010 8:29 pm | |
| it's good, now all you need is to get your custom jutsu accepted and then u can be approved | |
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| | Subject: Re: Kaizen Uchiha Tue Aug 03, 2010 8:31 pm | |
| I'm just waiting for u to approve it lol | |
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